STORY

A jack a father bird wanted to prove his ability agreed to take a simple task like taking of the egg while his wife was out,soon enough the egg was lost during a storm and was land in the hand of villain.Jack have to get the egg back with the help of his new friend Jill from an number of obstacle.

Designing the visual world Class exercise

Characters-Rango

Situations-Taken

Location/sets-Avatar

Scenarios-SAW

Atmosphere-Matrix

Colours-Schinlder's list

Costumes/hair/make up-Starwars

Props-Lord of the Ring

Language-Avatar

Music& Sound effect-JUON

One sentence summary
A newly employed lecture dealing with a class of foreign students.

Ms Dolores Courtney (England) - Quite sensitive about being called 'Mrs'

- Unique

Jeremy Brown (England)

- British accent

- unique, usual Englishman

Giovanni Capello (Italy)- Italian accent; Pasta~

- Stereotype

Anna Schmidt (German)

German accent

- stiff personality

- stereotyped

Chung Su-Lee (China)

- Quotes Mao

- Stereotype

Tarou Nagazumi (Japan)

can't pronounce 'l'

- adds 'o' after 'ng'

- stereotyped

Jamila Ranjha (India)- Hand and head movements; talks/complains a lot; speaks no English

- Stereotype

Maximillian Andrea Achimedes Panpandrious (Greece)

- Heavy accent with a "H" to almost every word

- Unique

Juan Cervantes (Spain)

- Mexican

- can't speak English at all

- stereotyped

Ranjeet Singh (India)- "A thousand apologies"; hand and head movements; VS Ali's religion; threaten with kirpan when angered

- Stereotype

Danielle Favre (France)

- Charming

- Stereotype

Ali Nadeem (Pakistan)

- Indian accent

- Moslem

 

Story 3Point structure

Character Bio

Tarou Nagazumi (Japan)
A elderly man who is proud of his country,like to bow whenever he is called upon.He is never seen without his camera.

Ali Nadeem (Pakistan)
Happy good lucky except having problem with the singh, he is the most vocal of the students and often literally misinterprets everything said by others. As a Pakistani Muslim he has a vocal and occasionally physical rivalry with Ranjeet, who is an Indian Sikh. By the middle of Series 2, although they continue to argue, Ali's rivalry with Ranjeet becomes less malicious, and they are on occasion able to work together without complaint. Ali's typical catchphrases are "yes please!", "oh blimey!", "squeeze me please!" (which is how he pronounces 'Excuse me please!') and "jolly good

What's make a good story. 06 january 2012

1.Theme
2. A good character(s)
3. A instresting Plot
4. Conflict
5.Turning Point
6. Motive
7. 3 ACT STRUCTURE
     Act1 - Setup
     Act2 - Confrontation
     Act3 - Resolution
8.Quest
9.Climax

How to start a story?
Start with genres,Brainstorm >IDEA> /Story Devt,1 sentence pitch,3 Act structure.

Focus>
What is your story about?
What relates to people?to you?

How to get story going?
1.Premise(About something is true)
2.What if
3.Why not?

Premise - earth will always be our home if there is hiope and respect for nature

What if - a robot in the future saves a plant so that humans can come back to earth from space.

Why not? - A robot as the saver.

Final draft

SCRIPT

FADE IN:

ACT 1

SCENE 1-EXT  THE VILLAGE STREET BETWEEN THE CLINICS - DAY

TWO RIVAL PHYSICIANS

A  man  standing  between  the  two clinics, while caught the attention of  the  two physicians.

LEE

OH, that’s may seem serious but no worry my friend, you will be feeling better after you eat my special brew pill.

patients x

It’s that true? I am  so relief  now after hearing that, I just can’t wait to try the pill.

Mr.Atas holds the man arm.

mr.atas

Come to my clinic, I can treat you with scan of the lastest light treatment so you don’t have to eat any awful old fashion pill.

Lee holds and pulls the man toward him.

LEE

You can always have faith in Chinese medical practices, but for others practices I don’t what they will do to you.

Mr.Atas holds and pulls the man back to him

MR.ATAS

Chinese medical practices are slow and painful consuming of bitter medicine, for western ha,

You can skip all that.

The man is having dilemma choosing between the two physicians.

Suddenly a girl runs in.

girl

DOCTORS!!!!A…A…A...VIRUSSS!!!HADDDD PURGE THE TOWNNN.

Without a words the two physician rush to understand the virus

Fade out:

Fade in

ACT TWO

SCENE- EXT OUTSIDE THE CLINIC-DAY

crotyn virus

An anonymous virus attacked the village. The village became a mess as everyone is worried about their family members who had the disease and they want to find a cure to it. They all were Gathering outside the clinic hoping for any news that the two physicians can help.

 Villages

Doctor! Help us! Many of ours family member are contaminated, do anyone of you have a cure?

        LEE

Yep. No worry everyone, I just need the one and the only plant call boo.

Meanwhile Mr.Atas speaks the same thing to the crowds and they look at each other and knowing that they need the same plant for the cure.

LEE

chinese medical will make the correct cure

therefore i will have the plant.

MR.ATAS

OH, by the time you are completed, everyone is dead; let my new way do the job you old fashioned.

Although they both didn’t sure their formula was right but they still do not want to give way and time just passed by. The truth is Mr.Atas knew the correct formula for the cure that it needed to use the ingredients by the western and brew with the technique of traditional Chinese practice which needed the help of Lee. But he refuses to let him know due to his own egotism.

FAdE OUT:

Fade in

ACT Three

SCENE- EXT LEE HOUSE-NIGHT

CRUCIAL SITUATION

The deadly crotyn spreading fast like plague and almost the whole town were infected, even the two physician is been infected.

LEE

ARHHHHHHH!!!!DAMMM,  I AMMM BLINDED!!

Lee already in stages three and left three hours to live.

MR.ATAS rush in lee room

MR.ATAS

Lee!!!! I am really sorry to keep

this secret to myself

LEE

What? (Gasping for air)

MR.ATAS

I can save you and the rest

with this secret formula

LEE

Let’s get down to business but

you have to help me with the

instruction as I am too weak to move

MR.ATAS

Sure (Rambling and gather all tools and pots)

LEE

You have to chop the roots off the herb as

we will only be using the leafy parts

A proceeded with his instruction.

LEE

We need the leafy parts and

 you have chopped off all the

 leaves and that is the essence of it !!!!

* gasping for air*

MR.ATAS went on to pick up the remaining leaves that he has chopped off.

LEE

Now, boil the ingredients with 2 pots of water

MR.ATAS went to gathered the water

LEE

I meant 2 pots of water and not 2 bowls of water,

 you moron * gasping for air*

MR.ATAS did it readily

LEE

Now add in 2 pinches of salt and stir

A did it as instructed

LEE

You are really an idiot* coughing and breathing heavily*,

 Stir it with a ladle

 and not with your hand!!!

MR.ATAS scrambled and almost drops the bowl

LEE

It will be ready when it boils,

 the portion will be correct if it tasted salty

MR.ATAS

OMG, it is really hot and I can’t taste anything now

MR.ATAS burnt his tongue when he tried to test it

LEE

You are really an idiot

 * He went quiet and closed his eyes*

MR.ATAS

Lee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 * wailing loudly*

The cure were complete just in time for both after a while the fever broke but Lee were lying on the bed motionless and his face were pale, on the verge of tears as Mr.Atas started to cry out his guilt of having egotism, disrespect others medical practice and not follow the principle of being a doctor is to save others life.

Lee suddenly gets up and burst into laughter, while Mr.Atas looked stunned and embarrassed over what he had said. The cure is completed.

They proceeded to help the rest with this successful remedy, everyone are saved in time.

FADE OUT:

Fade in

ACT FOUR

SCENE- EXT OUTSIDE CLINIC-DAY

PEACE?

This incident has bonded them together and they have to decide to call for a celebration based on this miracle.

LEE

I am thankful for Atas,

without his secret portion,

I will be in heaven by now

MR.ATAS smiled to the crowd

MR.ATAS and LEE

We have decided to combine our knowledge and set up a clinic together, we hope to bring more remedy for all of you

The villagers cheered loudly.

LEE

I have one condition here,

 and that is to plant more plants

or herb in Atas’s garden!!!

MR.ATAS

……………………………………………

………………………….* speechless*

FADE OUT:

STORY 5 FOR THE SCRIPT "The one and the only cure"

·         A village is been infected by a virus that brought two rival physician to work together for the cure.

Lee, a completely traditional Chinese physician that had been trained in the local medical school finally became an master in Chinese medicine and even had  his own clinic in town but his simple and peace life style were interrupted by a new physician Mr.Atas  ,newly graduated from westerns medical school introducing new treatment and fast recover using the latest technology .Since then increasing of people visited  Mr.Atas rather than lee because of the slow and the painful consuming of bitter medicine in traditional medicine. Lee afraid that Chinese medical practice will extinct that he started to dislike Mr.Atas and so do Mr.Atas feel for lee, that Chinese medical is old fashioned.

One day, an anonymous virus named crotyn broken out in the village and many of the villagers were contracted with the disease. The village became a mess as everyone is worried about their family members who had the disease and they want to find a cure to it. Villagers queued outside both physician clinic and the physicians know about the seriousness of this disease that it will kill a person in three stages. First stages fever and flu, second stage lower body paralyzes, third stage get blind and after three hours the person will die.

Both of them came up with an unsure formula to cure this disease but both of them needed the same ingredients which are a plant and it is the one and the only one left. The both of them were fighting against each others for the plant to be in their formula. But the truth is that Mr.Atas knew the correct formula for the cure as he learns it during his time in school that it needed to use the ingredients by the western and brew with the technique of traditional Chinese practice which needed the help of Lee. Mr.Atas decided to keep the secret due to his egotism of using western practice only.

The deadly crotyn spreader fast like plague and almost the whole town were infected, even the two physician is been infected. The situation is worse than Mr.Atas thought to be, that lee already in stage three and left three hours to live. There is no time to be egotism that Mr.Atas rush to tell lee which still able to speak ,about the true of the cure. Immediately Mr.Atas brews the antidote with the help of lee that lee couldn’t do it himself due to the virus.

The cure were complete just in time for lee to take it,Mr.Atas took one himself after a while the fever broke but Lee were lying on the bed motionless and his face were pale, on the verge of tears as Mr.Atas started to cry out his guilt of having egotism , disrespect others medical practice and not follow the principle of being a doctor is to save others life.

Lee suddenly gets up and burst into laughter, while Mr.Atas looked stunned and embarrassed over what he had said. The cure is completed.

WRITE THE VOICE & ACTION - THE X-FACTOR

Ms Dolores Courtney (England)
- Quite sensitive about being called 'Mrs'
- Unique

Jeremy Brown (England)
- British accent
- unique, usual Englishman

Giovanni Capello (Italy)
- Italian accent; Pasta~
- Stereotype

Anna Schmidt (German)
German accent

- stiff personality

- stereotyped

Chung Su-Lee (China)
- Quotes Mao
- Stereotype

Tarou Nagazumi (Japan)
can't pronounce 'l'

- adds 'o' after 'ng'

- stereotyped

Jamila Ranjha (India)
- Hand and head movements; talks/complains a lot; speaks no English
- Stereotype

Maximillian Andrea Achimedes Panpandrious (Greece)
- Heavy accent with a "H" to almost every word
- Unique

Juan Cervantes (Spain)

- Mexican

- can't speak English at all

- stereotyped

 Ranjeet Singh (India)
- "A thousand apologies"; hand and head movements; VS Ali's religion; threaten with kirpan when angered
- Stereotype

Danielle Favre (France)
- Charming
- Stereotype

Ali Nadeem (Pakistan)

- Indian accent

- Moslem