Final draft

SCRIPT

FADE IN:

ACT 1

SCENE 1-EXT  THE VILLAGE STREET BETWEEN THE CLINICS - DAY

TWO RIVAL PHYSICIANS

A  man  standing  between  the  two clinics, while caught the attention of  the  two physicians.

LEE

OH, that’s may seem serious but no worry my friend, you will be feeling better after you eat my special brew pill.

patients x

It’s that true? I am  so relief  now after hearing that, I just can’t wait to try the pill.

Mr.Atas holds the man arm.

mr.atas

Come to my clinic, I can treat you with scan of the lastest light treatment so you don’t have to eat any awful old fashion pill.

Lee holds and pulls the man toward him.

LEE

You can always have faith in Chinese medical practices, but for others practices I don’t what they will do to you.

Mr.Atas holds and pulls the man back to him

MR.ATAS

Chinese medical practices are slow and painful consuming of bitter medicine, for western ha,

You can skip all that.

The man is having dilemma choosing between the two physicians.

Suddenly a girl runs in.

girl

DOCTORS!!!!A…A…A...VIRUSSS!!!HADDDD PURGE THE TOWNNN.

Without a words the two physician rush to understand the virus

Fade out:

Fade in

ACT TWO

SCENE- EXT OUTSIDE THE CLINIC-DAY

crotyn virus

An anonymous virus attacked the village. The village became a mess as everyone is worried about their family members who had the disease and they want to find a cure to it. They all were Gathering outside the clinic hoping for any news that the two physicians can help.

 Villages

Doctor! Help us! Many of ours family member are contaminated, do anyone of you have a cure?

        LEE

Yep. No worry everyone, I just need the one and the only plant call boo.

Meanwhile Mr.Atas speaks the same thing to the crowds and they look at each other and knowing that they need the same plant for the cure.

LEE

chinese medical will make the correct cure

therefore i will have the plant.

MR.ATAS

OH, by the time you are completed, everyone is dead; let my new way do the job you old fashioned.

Although they both didn’t sure their formula was right but they still do not want to give way and time just passed by. The truth is Mr.Atas knew the correct formula for the cure that it needed to use the ingredients by the western and brew with the technique of traditional Chinese practice which needed the help of Lee. But he refuses to let him know due to his own egotism.

FAdE OUT:

Fade in

ACT Three

SCENE- EXT LEE HOUSE-NIGHT

CRUCIAL SITUATION

The deadly crotyn spreading fast like plague and almost the whole town were infected, even the two physician is been infected.

LEE

ARHHHHHHH!!!!DAMMM,  I AMMM BLINDED!!

Lee already in stages three and left three hours to live.

MR.ATAS rush in lee room

MR.ATAS

Lee!!!! I am really sorry to keep

this secret to myself

LEE

What? (Gasping for air)

MR.ATAS

I can save you and the rest

with this secret formula

LEE

Let’s get down to business but

you have to help me with the

instruction as I am too weak to move

MR.ATAS

Sure (Rambling and gather all tools and pots)

LEE

You have to chop the roots off the herb as

we will only be using the leafy parts

A proceeded with his instruction.

LEE

We need the leafy parts and

 you have chopped off all the

 leaves and that is the essence of it !!!!

* gasping for air*

MR.ATAS went on to pick up the remaining leaves that he has chopped off.

LEE

Now, boil the ingredients with 2 pots of water

MR.ATAS went to gathered the water

LEE

I meant 2 pots of water and not 2 bowls of water,

 you moron * gasping for air*

MR.ATAS did it readily

LEE

Now add in 2 pinches of salt and stir

A did it as instructed

LEE

You are really an idiot* coughing and breathing heavily*,

 Stir it with a ladle

 and not with your hand!!!

MR.ATAS scrambled and almost drops the bowl

LEE

It will be ready when it boils,

 the portion will be correct if it tasted salty

MR.ATAS

OMG, it is really hot and I can’t taste anything now

MR.ATAS burnt his tongue when he tried to test it

LEE

You are really an idiot

 * He went quiet and closed his eyes*

MR.ATAS

Lee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 * wailing loudly*

The cure were complete just in time for both after a while the fever broke but Lee were lying on the bed motionless and his face were pale, on the verge of tears as Mr.Atas started to cry out his guilt of having egotism, disrespect others medical practice and not follow the principle of being a doctor is to save others life.

Lee suddenly gets up and burst into laughter, while Mr.Atas looked stunned and embarrassed over what he had said. The cure is completed.

They proceeded to help the rest with this successful remedy, everyone are saved in time.

FADE OUT:

Fade in

ACT FOUR

SCENE- EXT OUTSIDE CLINIC-DAY

PEACE?

This incident has bonded them together and they have to decide to call for a celebration based on this miracle.

LEE

I am thankful for Atas,

without his secret portion,

I will be in heaven by now

MR.ATAS smiled to the crowd

MR.ATAS and LEE

We have decided to combine our knowledge and set up a clinic together, we hope to bring more remedy for all of you

The villagers cheered loudly.

LEE

I have one condition here,

 and that is to plant more plants

or herb in Atas’s garden!!!

MR.ATAS

……………………………………………

………………………….* speechless*

FADE OUT:

STORY 5 FOR THE SCRIPT "The one and the only cure"

·         A village is been infected by a virus that brought two rival physician to work together for the cure.

Lee, a completely traditional Chinese physician that had been trained in the local medical school finally became an master in Chinese medicine and even had  his own clinic in town but his simple and peace life style were interrupted by a new physician Mr.Atas  ,newly graduated from westerns medical school introducing new treatment and fast recover using the latest technology .Since then increasing of people visited  Mr.Atas rather than lee because of the slow and the painful consuming of bitter medicine in traditional medicine. Lee afraid that Chinese medical practice will extinct that he started to dislike Mr.Atas and so do Mr.Atas feel for lee, that Chinese medical is old fashioned.

One day, an anonymous virus named crotyn broken out in the village and many of the villagers were contracted with the disease. The village became a mess as everyone is worried about their family members who had the disease and they want to find a cure to it. Villagers queued outside both physician clinic and the physicians know about the seriousness of this disease that it will kill a person in three stages. First stages fever and flu, second stage lower body paralyzes, third stage get blind and after three hours the person will die.

Both of them came up with an unsure formula to cure this disease but both of them needed the same ingredients which are a plant and it is the one and the only one left. The both of them were fighting against each others for the plant to be in their formula. But the truth is that Mr.Atas knew the correct formula for the cure as he learns it during his time in school that it needed to use the ingredients by the western and brew with the technique of traditional Chinese practice which needed the help of Lee. Mr.Atas decided to keep the secret due to his egotism of using western practice only.

The deadly crotyn spreader fast like plague and almost the whole town were infected, even the two physician is been infected. The situation is worse than Mr.Atas thought to be, that lee already in stage three and left three hours to live. There is no time to be egotism that Mr.Atas rush to tell lee which still able to speak ,about the true of the cure. Immediately Mr.Atas brews the antidote with the help of lee that lee couldn’t do it himself due to the virus.

The cure were complete just in time for lee to take it,Mr.Atas took one himself after a while the fever broke but Lee were lying on the bed motionless and his face were pale, on the verge of tears as Mr.Atas started to cry out his guilt of having egotism , disrespect others medical practice and not follow the principle of being a doctor is to save others life.

Lee suddenly gets up and burst into laughter, while Mr.Atas looked stunned and embarrassed over what he had said. The cure is completed.

WRITE THE VOICE & ACTION - THE X-FACTOR

Ms Dolores Courtney (England)
- Quite sensitive about being called 'Mrs'
- Unique

Jeremy Brown (England)
- British accent
- unique, usual Englishman

Giovanni Capello (Italy)
- Italian accent; Pasta~
- Stereotype

Anna Schmidt (German)
German accent

- stiff personality

- stereotyped

Chung Su-Lee (China)
- Quotes Mao
- Stereotype

Tarou Nagazumi (Japan)
can't pronounce 'l'

- adds 'o' after 'ng'

- stereotyped

Jamila Ranjha (India)
- Hand and head movements; talks/complains a lot; speaks no English
- Stereotype

Maximillian Andrea Achimedes Panpandrious (Greece)
- Heavy accent with a "H" to almost every word
- Unique

Juan Cervantes (Spain)

- Mexican

- can't speak English at all

- stereotyped

 Ranjeet Singh (India)
- "A thousand apologies"; hand and head movements; VS Ali's religion; threaten with kirpan when angered
- Stereotype

Danielle Favre (France)
- Charming
- Stereotype

Ali Nadeem (Pakistan)

- Indian accent

- Moslem

STEP 3: GIVE ONE OR TWO EXAMPLES OF A BLOCKBUSTER / SUCCESSFUL MOVIE THAT FITS THE ABOVE 25-GENRE-DRIVEN STORIES.

Story 11: Drama - Growing up
Story 12: Documentary-world war two in colours
Story 13: News / Current Affairs - modern city
Story 14: Comedy-  Horrible bosses
Story 15: Horror - Saw
Story 16: Action -Police story
Story 17: Mystery / Thriller / Crime - Unknown
Story 18: Teenage Drama - High school musical
Story 19: Romance - You've got mail
Story 20: Fantasy / Sci-Fi - Matrix
Story 21: Children - Up
Story 22: Adventure / Swashbucklers - Paul the alien
Story 23:johnny English
Story 24:Lord of the ring
Story 25:taken

STEP2: CREATE STORIES FOR THESE GENRES:

Story 11: Drama :A old man suspected his children planning to kill him in order to get his wealthy .

Story 12: Documentary:It's took twleve months for human baby to born,how long will it take for others animals to give birth.

Story 13: News / Current Affairs:Japan survive its tusumi,and can it survive its aftermath?

Story 14: Comedy: A hopeless man and a hopeless cat chasing for their hopeless dream.

Story 15: Horror: The town people were dying one by one by an evil cursed from a witch.

Story 16: Action: A retired marine,needed to save his sister which were taken away by a group of mafia.

Story 17: Mystery / Thriller / Crime: John needed to find its clues for the series bombing incident by answers call from given phone booth.

Story 18: Teenage Drama :Peter join his friend music band by disobey his parents.

Story 19: Romance : Max falling in love with an online pal mate and discovers their it was his business rival

Story 20: Fantasy / Sci-Fi : An large forces of alien arrive in earth to find love.

Story 21: Children : A venge plushy bear is having a plan to destroy,the city.

Story 22: Adventure / Swashbucklers : A group of dogs manage to get free and began to start travel to the land of Alisha.

Story 23: A dragon fly his way to the city to get himself a can of cola.

Story 24 :A scientist test himself and got himself into a monster.

Story 25 :A group of bandit meet a group of student in a deserted town,the student must plan of an way to save themselves.

STEP1: CREATE & CRAFT 10 STORIES INTO THE 1-SENTENCE SUMMARY

Story1: Billy had break out of the jail again,what foolish stuff he be up to this time round.

Story2: Wild west is a place for nasty guy ,and a well-educated man being force by his boss to have his holiday there.

Story3: An magic bottle uncovered by a group of children ,and a mafia is hunting this group of kid for the bottle.

Story4:  A bomb in the building,his family is kidnapped and he is an police that only got time for one,who will he choose.

Story5: King wants his wife,he wants his throne and they need to fight for what they wants.

Story6: When a police and a criminal trap in a cave ,they needed to work together to escape.

Story7: Tom was slow down by a cyclist while on a rush to work that he have an conflict with the cyclist,and they both were been chase by a group of gangster.

Story8: Tom and john were on the trip to la's Vargas ,but on the way accidentally hit and kill a person and now they on a run and finding way to hide the dead body.

Story9:  A mother pigeon need to travel to the south to find her son as its was taken mistakenly by other bird.

Story10: Magician gone out of job that he want to travel to world for a right place for him to earn a living.

Post 2

Storyline

1.  There is this village with this two physician,they never get along.

2.  They like to compete with each other almost everything.

3.  One day,an virus were spread in the village, and village were hoping the two physician could help.

4.  Both physician got the recipe for the cure but short of the same item which is a plant.

5.  They set their way out and bump into each other on the way.

6.  They finally found the plant but its about to die,and in order to save it they both need to work together.

7.   They both got back and brew their own cure however its appeared useless unless they combine their cure.

8.  There seem to be no choice ,so they both agree to work together again.

9. They both save the village against the virus,and both of them realize they enjoying collaboration than competing with each others.

Scene Breakdown

1.   Village Clinic. INT, day.

Both physician busy with their patient meanwhile they competing their skill.

2.   Village street. Ext, day.

Villagers gathering out the clinic asking help from the two physician.

3.   Forest. Ext, day.

they bump into each other while finding for the cure.

4.   The hill

Ext, day. 

they found their plant but they needs teamwork.

5.   Clinic 

int, night. 

They find out the cure needed to combined to make it works.

6.   Bar.

Ext, night

They both discuss and agree to it.

7.   Outside the clinic

ext day. 

villagers gathered for appreciation for both of them,they both made their speech about their collaboration in the future.

Compilation-and-summary

Story 1 The kindness

1-Sentence Pitch

"Kindness is never enough; there is always a habit to ask for more."

Story 2 Kinship

1-Sentence Pitch

“Computer and money are important ,but kinship are essential.” 

Story 3 A change

1-Sentence Pitch

"A man survived an plane clash and landed on an unknown island,on the island he found himself accompany with an group of talking duckling,whose refused to help him home."

Story 4 Grow

1-Sentence Pitch

An lost young rhinoceros was on the way finding his family ,On the journeys he met friends that he have never see before and dangerous encounter  that had transform him to an brave and mature rhinoceros.

Story 5 Teamwork

1-Sentence Pitch

Two physician fighting against each other for business, they are rival but now the village were infection by an unknown disease .Both of them had their own recipe for the antidote but they both short of the same item(plants) to completed and who will managed to get it first?

For the transcript assignment, I chose Story 5 "Teamwork".

CHARACTERS in "Teamwork"

Protagonist: Chinese physician
Age: 39
Gender: male

Protagonist: English physician
Age: 43
Gender: male

Character Bio

A.     Chinese physician

1.      Physical

a.     He is chinese

b.     He got an half cut bald head.

c.      He has black tiny eyes.

2.     Beliefs

a.     He solemnly believes that chinese medical is the best treatment in the world.

3.     Behavior

a.     He is a confidence and stubborn person.

4.     Interests

a.     He is only interested in his benefits and skill.

5.     Nature and personality

a.     He is upright, soft-hearted.

b.     He likes to be praised.

6.     Experiences

a.     His whole life, he has been trained in chinese medical.

7.     Relationships

a.     He lives alone,he was adopted by his mentor.

8.     Strengths and weaknesses

a.     Strengths

1.     He has kong fu

2.     He never cares about anything beside himself.

9.     Motives and objectives

a.     He wants to be the most skill physician in the village.

b.     He wants to regain more fame.

B.     English physician

1.     Physical

a.     He is from the wealthily family.

b.     He has grey hair.

c.      He wear spectacular with round small lens.

2.     Beliefs

a.     He believes that english medical is the most sophisticated of all others medical knowledge.

3.     Behavior

a.     He is a polite fellow but not to his rival.

4.     Interests

a.     He likes winning.

5.     Nature and personality

a.     He is very humorous person.

6.     Experiences

a.     He traveled the whole Europe before he decided to stay in the village.

7.     Relationships

a.     His parents lives in his homeland.

8.     Strengths and weaknesses

a.     Strengths

1.     He is very resilient and hardworking.

b.     Weaknesses

1.     His is childish sometime.

9.     Motives and objectives

a.     He wants to expand his skills to others places

b.     He wants make to friends.