Exercise 2,Story 2

1-Sentence Pitch

“Computer and money are important ,but kinship are essential.” 

Story

Kim who was a boy ,that obsessed with computer game so much that he could forgetting his meal, even what day is today. For his daily routine was to wake up and start playing until he got tired at home. He never gets out; even to breathe the outside air. For his every meal, were taken care by his mother.

Kim has friends, but all were just online friend that you don’t even know how they look like. He is very lazy, he don’t even get up to get himself a glasses of water as his mother is the one that get everything prepare for him.

 There is this day, Kim wake up doing his own usual game playing as he is trained his character for an important competition. All of an sudden the screen of the computer went black out, also the fan that blowing him stopped ,Kim face turned red and was very angry. So he shouted his mother “MUM!!!MUM!!!”.After shouting and shouting for twenty minute, that he could not take it no more, he get up of his seat. Immediately after he stood up, he found out that he could not carry his own weight so he have to reach out for support and he slowly made his way out his room.

Just Then he reach the living room with a shock, realized that his living room have changed so much since his last seen, as he look across the room ,and found a trace of water leaking from the kitchen so he thought his mother must be inside and notice something is wrong. He use all the energy he have to quickly made his way in, then he saw his mother laying on the floor with a pot of water. His mother must had slip and fell while holding the pot when the water from the pot splash onto the electric socket and caused the black out. As anxious as he can be ,he get his house phone tried to call the ambulance but the phone got no power due to the blackout .The only thing he could do is to carry his mother out, so he did, so just when he made his way out to the lift l, his neighbors  just came back from work helping him to call for ambulance.

While waiting  outside  the operation room, all he hope now is hoping his mother will be fine, after a while the doctor came out and shook his head, tapping on Kim shoulder .Kim started to shed tears. He rushes in beside his mother bed and hug her while realized that his mother hair had gotten so gray. As he feel guilty that he miss a lot of time with her while waste a lot of time doing something that’s doesn’t exist in the real world. His mother have work so hard and do so much to brought him up yet all he do is do nothing to repay her ,the more he think the more he cry .

Suddenly there came a voice “KIM!!KIM” the voice is so familiar, Kim open up his eyes ,and saw his mother was waking him up, as relief as he can get he hug his mother and asked for forgiveness that he will be a changed person from now on. The mother stays silent with a smile on the face.